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Location - Blue Planet          Year -...It doesn't really matter anymore.


All that matters is that there are still some of us alive...still some of us free.

After Golbez left...we thought it was over. So much for that...
About a year after the Red Moon left orbit, He appeared. No one knew just how he came to the Blue Planet...not that it mattered.

The fact of the matter was...He was here....Zeromus, the bane of worlds, and now...ours.

We fought...but against those creatures, the Lost Ones, there was no hope of winning. They were too powerful for us humans, and the Fey;  well, they kept to themselves...watching us from their inaccessible forests and swamps in our futile attempt to keep our world.

Those of us that remained founded a resistance deep in the cave systems of an unnamed mountain range, led by Paladin Cecil and the former rulers of the various kingdoms: Edge, Yang, Edward, the Clerics, and the Elder. We were also aided by King Giott and those from the Underworld.

Then the unexpected happened...the Red Moon returned.

Golbez came back to finish what he had started, to destroy Zeromus.

But Zeromus had become too strong, not even the Lunarians and their great powers could  stand against him. In the terrible fiasco, their moon was destroyed.

Fortunately, they managed to relocate to our planet in time. Well, at least some thought it was fortunate, others did not.

Now we are more divided than ever before.

Most humans, despising the Lunars for bringing this horror upon us, fought them at every turn.

The Lunars, of course, fought back.

In the end, both lost.

Now there are three colonies, desperately trying to survive against all odds.

The Lunar colony, which resides in the North Outlands.

The human colony, in the South.

And in the cave systems of the Nameless Mountains, led by Alan KluYa and his sons, Cecil and Marcus Golbez Ya; humans, Lunars, the Underworlders, and even a few Fey who sided with our cause coexist in a feeble attempt to regain peace, our  world, and our freedom.

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The Red Eclipse Dimension. A FFIV alternate reality.

Almost all of the Sygnus fans have their own alternate FFIV reality...who am I to be left out. :XD:

What do you think? Any and all feedback is welcome.
Including punctuation corrections.



FFIV is © Square Enix
Marcus and Alan belong to me

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*Scutterland May 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:la: This is probably completely irrelevant because I don't know what the Sygnus is but to me personally I felt a little bombarded with a bunch of names I had no idea who they were at first but in a way I like that in a story because it's just so exciting and mysterious and it makes you want to know "who are they?" What can I say, I love surprises :D Very deep storyline, definitely an epic start! :squee:
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~TalonV May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!

If you'd like to know the basic jist, you should read my most favoritest webcomic, Wayrift [link] . My story is like an alternate dimension of that world. XD I can talk all day about how good that comic is; it's completely clean, has awesome morals, and it has led me to friends who have helped me out of a deep rut in my life when I was pretty down.

Wayrift, in a way, helped me gain more confidence in my art and in talking to other people. :3

Beware though; once you start reading, there isn't any way to stop. XD The comic has been online for over 10 years and has an archive of over 1000 pages. And it's updated with a new page every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. :la:
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*Scutterland May 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Awesome! Thanks for the link! :la: XD I've been warned... XD
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~Yllamse Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D

It's a good start! I love this! :meow:
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~TalonV Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

I don't know if I'm going to write anymore though. I might.
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~Yllamse Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:meow: You're welcome. :D

I'll look forward to seeing more...no worries if you don't though. :aww:
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~TalonV Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I wrote this during one of those ultra-rare times of intense inspiration. You know, one of times when you go back later at what you did and you have to do a double-take just to make sure it really was you who did it.

I'd like to write more myself, but I'm not anywhere near skilled enough yet. ^^;
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~Yllamse Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
All it takes is practice. :)

I understand though, writing is fun for me...but I'm not a real writer. ^^;
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~TalonV Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:)

Speaking of writing...how's that story coming?
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~Yllamse Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I've got a basic idea of what I want to write and I even have a cause for the characters to meet up...I just need to find the "villain" of the story. Other than that, I'm not allowed to write anything just yet.
Gotta wait 'till the first. :squee: I can't wait! :squee:
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